Im back ! Finally after struggling with my modem which apparently got infected with virus.. I'll not live up to my promise, and therefore create a new post for you all to read (or whatever you want to do with it.. ) I'll post two of my poems which successfully endured my mood swings and self doubts and made it to this world and my college magazine :D
Disclaimer
Dont expect anything from my poems ! You'll be thoroughly disappointed and may even start hyperventilating trying to understand me and and my poems.
Sun Sets Upon The Sea
The sky felt not the heartless tear,
rising from the sea like a lifeless soul;
devoid of cheer, devoid of fear,
devoid of hope to reach its goal
The fire which taught it how to fly,
seemed more heavy than its weight could hold;
Distant from the World,its thoughts did lie
hidden in the dark like a dream untold
Aspiring for the light,hidden above,
illumining the land, the sea, the sky;
Opened its arms, like the wings of the dove,
Only to learn what it couldn't defy..
Drowning in its home with no wish
to endure the push of the new born tide,
Jumping like the heart endowed with bliss,
Skipped a beat when the wave took flight.
The sky ripened like a full grown peach,
Descending with an enchanting grace;
The ray of light danced in glee,
when the sun met the sea in tight embrace...
Incomplete Rhyme
Some callow thoughts traverse my mind,
to let a rhyme assay their worth;
but like the moon, they go all blind,
to their darkness, to their dearth.
Down in the rhyme, these thoughts get pinned;
but like a fish drowned in the flood,
and like a leaf torn by the wind;
they in their nest, get choked on blood..
Squished by the eyes they always had
wanted to write them down in time;
Struggling for breath with their mouth mud clad,
they form another incomplete rhyme...
Friday, December 25, 2009
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Very Impressive..!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nemessian :-)
ReplyDeleteThe work lives up to the expection of any who knows you vijeta. A skilled poet, that's what you are. Use your potentials to the fullest. I've known you and your work for quite long now and know you can write more and write better. So want to see more posts in your blog.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Diksha :-) You are being too kind in designating me the position of a "skilled poet" ;-) Im still very raw and need to learn a lot, which I can with the encouragement and guidance of people around me ! Take cr !
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